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I've been lying down for hours now. It's 5:35AM and there's not much I can do. You know what the worst part about my situation is? I'm in the same room with my parents. They keep looking at me, and I can't help but look back and try not to cry or scream. Their eyes are focused on me and their mouths are wide open. There's the strong scent of blood and I feel so paralyzed with fear.

Here's the thing. The second I make any hint that I'm not asleep anymore, I'm completely screwed. I will die and there's nobody around to save me. I've been trying to think of a way out but the only idea I have is to rush for the door, run outside the front door and scream for help, hoping any neighbours will hear me. It's risky, but if I stay here, I'll surely die. He's waiting for me to wake up and see his masterpiece.

You're probably wondering what's going on. I do  get ahead of myself sometimes.

About three hours ago, I heard screaming from the other side of the house. I got up and went to check on the noise before realizing I had to use the restroom. Instead of doing the smart thing and investigating, I used the bathroom first. I could've gotten myself killed right then from my stupid actions. But I actually did my business and took a peek outside thee bathroom. There was blood on the carpet. I got very worried and ran back to my room, hiding under my sheets like the pussy I was. I tried to convince myself to go back to sleep, that is was just some really vivid dream or something.

But I heard my bedroom door open. Like the terrified child I was, I peeked from under my blankets to see what was going on. I could see something dragging my dead parents into the room. It was not human, I can tell you that. It was hairless, with no eyes and no clothing. It walked like a caveman, with its back slouched as it dragged my parents. But this thing was much smarter than an caveman. It was aware of what it was doing.

It propped my dad up on the edge of my bed, and made him face me. It then sat my mother down in the chair and postitioned her towards me aswell. It then started rubbing its hands upon the walls, staining them with blood and then drew a circle with the devil's pentagram inside it. This thing had made what it would probably call a masterpiece. To finish it off, it scribbled a message onto the wall that I could not read in the darkness.

It then positioned itself under my bed, waiting to strike.

The scariest thing is now, my eyes have adjusted to the darkness since then and I can read the message on the wall. I don't want to look at it, because it's terrifying to think about. But I feel I need to see, before I'm killed.

I peek at the creatures masterpiece...

"I know you're awake."
Yeah, just thought I'd try something a little different.

Just came up with this out of nowhere ;D
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daskrip Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
This is one of my favorite CreepyPasta stories ever. You have a talent for coming up with an extremely terrifying scenario. I imagined this happening to me in real life, and, man. The thought of being stuck in bed, with my dead parents sitting beside me and staring at me, knowing that just a shiver could get me killed. And then, I find THAT written on the wall.
I don't think I can think of anything more frightening than that. Well done.
And, leaving what happens next to the viewer's imagination. GOOD CHOICE.
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daskrip Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
This is one of my favorite CreepyPasta stories ever. You have a talent for coming up with an extremely terrifying scenario. I imagined this happening to me in real life, and, man. The thought of being stuck in bed, with my dead parents sitting beside me and staring at me, knowing that just a shiver could get me killed. And then, I find THAT written on the wall.
I don't think I can think of anything more frightening than that. Well done.
And, leaving what happens next to the viewer's imagination. GOOD CHOICE.
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shadowlover201 Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Student Artist
ik you don't really like me but the story is good
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Supermans-Son Featured By Owner May 11, 2011  Student Artist
Thanks, I don't care who if it's off, if I like them or not. Criticism is good either way. :)
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snowlionsroar Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
It's not original. It's all over the internet.
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Supermans-Son Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2010  Student Artist
...Scientology then?
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lolsanity123 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah man, this is really close to the usual creepy pasta. Still good though.
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Supermans-Son Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2010  Student Artist
Nice one, thanks brah
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humababa Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2010
woa! OMG that is just..*dies*
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